I felt like me and William did a pretty good job on our short film. I mean, it would have been better if had had a better budget, but we didn’t, so I’m pretty proud wit how it turned out. The thing was, we didn’t really need to write the movie or anything because we directly based it off my short story “The Note”. The two things I need to do better next time are audio quality and less lengthy clips in which nothing happens. The main reason the audio quality wasn’t that great was because we were just figuring out Mr. Sarte’s fancy new microphone, plus it was like our thirtieth take, so I was starting to get sick of narrating. One thing I was really proud of was capturing the extremely depressing feel of the original short story. Another thing not many noticed. Go back over it and look closely at the background. Where in the school was it filmed, you won’t be able to figure it out and it’ll mess with your head, that is, if you go to the inquiry hub.

You can watch my short film here